But, but, I love that paragraph! Are you quite sure you need to cut it?
All right, all right, you're the writer. And yet, I still feel the need to ask plaintively whether you are quite sure it doesn't simply want a different story to be in, if it really doesn't belong in the one where it started.
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All right, all right, you're the writer. And yet, I still feel the need to ask plaintively whether you are quite sure it doesn't simply want a different story to be in, if it really doesn't belong in the one where it started.