thuviaptarth: tsuzuki and hisoka in the rain (dry roots love rain)
thuvia ptarth ([personal profile] thuviaptarth) wrote2004-09-12 09:42 pm
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Yami no Matsuei: Rewritten on the Body

Title: Rewritten on the Body
Fandom: Yami no Matsuei
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: So pretty I think about stealing them all the time. But no, not mine.
Summary: No challenge, and yet a drabble.



He keeps trying to copy it to paper: the curse written on his body, the red ribbons that bind pain to skin and soul to soul. Lines twist away from him; pens blot, brushes smear, pencil points break. It would be sensible to let someone else try, but facing the mirror is hard enough.

In the dark, Tsuzuki's gentle fingers trace new ideograms on his skin, rewriting curses into blessings. Fuda for protection, fuda for transformation, fuda for bringing the weary peace and the lost home. Hisoka never knew, never knew before, how much the paper must love the pen.

[identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com 2004-09-12 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
...so beautiful. I dead from sweet.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

They do bring out my inner sap.

[identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 08:31 am (UTC)(link)
...but in a good way.

[identity profile] minnow1212.livejournal.com 2004-09-12 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, pretty and evocative. (In a way where I don't know what's going on, but kinda get it. I think. Enough. It brought to mind the image of Willow tracing calligraphy on Tara in Restless, and words rising up over her skin in season 6, anyway, and those aren't bad images to have.)

Rewriting curses into blessings--neat.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Descendants of Darkness, rentable at Netflix and probably Blockbuster. I'm just saying. ;)

Thank you -- and yes, it is something like those images, which is one reason I like it so much. I do always like images of words on skin.

[identity profile] ranalore.livejournal.com 2004-09-12 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
::cries::

You realize, this is the basis of the epic Hisoka/Oriya I'm working on right now, and. Well. I realized it couldn't possibly be a theme I was the only one to see. But.

::cries::

It's even titled Written on the Body.

That said, this is utterly gorgeous.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 07:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm glad you like it.

I look forward to all the hate mail that will accuse me of shamelessly stealing idea and title from you. I am pondering dignified silence vs. "No, really we both stole it from Jeanette Winterson."

Hua already did something like it in that lovely Tat/His Yuletide story, I think, but--it's such an evocative image, with so many implications, I think we could all play with it and there would still be new things to discover. I was toying with the idea of expanding this, because I had to leave some things out.

[identity profile] ranalore.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I look forward to all the hate mail that will accuse me of shamelessly stealing idea and title from you. I am pondering dignified silence vs. "No, really we both stole it from Jeanette Winterson."

Actually, I suspect I'll be the one accused, since my story won't be coming out for at least a few weeks (I'm still writing it). And while I didn't get the title from JW, that's certainly where I grabbed the title. *G*

Hua already did something like it in that lovely Tat/His Yuletide story, I think, but--it's such an evocative image, with so many implications, I think we could all play with it and there would still be new things to discover. I was toying with the idea of expanding this, because I had to leave some things out.

I'd love to see the expansion, to be honest. I've read the Tat/His, and it didn't throw me in the same way, I think because the execution was sufficiently different. That and the title wasn't at all similar. I think it was just the combination of the two that startled me. And you're right, it is such and evocative image and idea. I was very surprised not to run across at least a dozen stories on the theme when I first got into YnM.

Maybe it's just an idea whose time has come.

[identity profile] ranalore.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I need a beta for my comments now. @@ I meant I didn't get the idea from JW, but I did get the title from her.

[identity profile] boniblithe.livejournal.com 2004-09-12 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I love you. I may have said that a time or two. But it's true!
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 07:25 am (UTC)(link)
*beams*

[identity profile] rachelmanija.livejournal.com 2004-09-12 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like that. Especially the last clause.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I was worried that that bit was over the top.

[identity profile] rachelmanija.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 08:41 am (UTC)(link)
If it's not over the top, it's not anime. ;)

[identity profile] ascian3.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
I have no clue what this relates to, but I think I want to. It was gorgeous.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 05:37 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Yami no Matsuei is an anime series released in the US as Descendants of Darkness; [livejournal.com profile] boniblithe dragged me into the whole thing with her crack van overview (http://www.livejournal.com/community/crack_van/580186.html) and a link to this gorgeous music video (http://www.plutonianshore.net/wtf/amv.html) ("Possession").

I plan on writing up my impressions of the series at some point, but I think it might especially appeal to you because of the characters who are afraid of the monstrous in themselves, or define themselves as monstrous, and are brought to believe in their own humanity when they're offered emotional connections, forgiveness, and love--and when they learn to offer these things to others. The characters do not remind me of Jossverse characters, but the some of the themes are similar.

[identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 08:29 am (UTC)(link)
So much so that I keep stopping myself from trying to do an Angel crossover. Two of the characters are a little like Connor, only completely different...oh, forget it. Just listen to her, she's right.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
No, no, Kamui from X is Connor. Tsuzuki and Hisoka are Mulder and Scully. [livejournal.com profile] boniblithe and I worked it all out in great detail.

Tatsumi has his Anya moments, but they're not really cognates.

[identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
..but which one wears the sensible pumps?

Yeah. Tatsumi and Anya are alike in many respects, but worlds apart in others. It's a pity Caritas blew up though, I'd love to see the Yami crew breeze in there one night..."Okay, first? You're all complete wrecks."
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 10:51 am (UTC)(link)
I suspect Hisoka doesn't sing.

Hisoka is Scully. No pumps, but his version of neat office attire. Also reserved; passionate; distrustful; prone to being underestimated because of height, youth, and prettiness; with a history of sexual abuse; and devoted beyond reason to a partner whose reckless pursuit of a mission can be more self-destructive than helpful at times.

Tsuzuki's resemblance to Mulder is less pronounced, but there's height, guilt, and trenchcoats.

Boni thinks I put way too much thought into this.

[identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I think Boni's right, but it's awfully cute.

I suspect Hisoka doesn't sing.
Not in front of people, anyway. But it's canon the rest of them do...

[identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 08:27 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. God. So beautiful. Such pretty language, and I adore your Hisoka.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked. (And I hope today goes better.)

[identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com 2004-09-13 09:31 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, but of course I liked it. You always write so wonderfully.

(Thank you so very much.)

[identity profile] jtriskell.livejournal.com 2004-09-17 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Another lovely piece, with a real feeling of *home* about it.
It's all in this, for me, really "how much the paper must love the pen" -- makes me want to curl up with a cup of hot chocolate and hear the rain splatter against the window.
Can't explain better, but I love the image of Tsu writing fudas on Soka's curses. Just *dies*.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-09-21 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you -- that's the feeling I wanted to end with. (The fuda, as far as I can tell, are actually the paper and not just the words; probably I should have said "spells," since the drabble got compressed down so far.)

[identity profile] lisa-bee.livejournal.com 2004-10-18 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
Mmm, lovely. The last line just stole my breath.

Thank you.
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[identity profile] thuviaptarth.livejournal.com 2004-10-29 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!