That was...riding at the edges of my prefs. Or comfort zone. Or something. And there were parts I skimmed past.
But for me the hardest part of this story is the thread throughout that the demon is intimate with Dean, but doesn't return that intimacy. That the sex isn't shared - it's damaging, and very one-sided damage. It's close to rape, throughout, despite Dean's very enthusiastic participation.
Brilliant concept. Just - excellent idea. Yeah. How to fuck up Dean Winchester in five easy steps.
This line: Dean Winchester lives in his skin so he doesn't have to live in his head, but right now it's his skin that's the problem, that fine body that his daddy bought him. Yes, that. That exactly.
Your handle on Dean's character is as solid as your concept of Sam, I think.
Love that you didn't forget about Cassie - it seems many fic writers do, when they talk about the people Dean loves.
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Killer title.
That was...riding at the edges of my prefs. Or comfort zone. Or something. And there were parts I skimmed past.
But for me the hardest part of this story is the thread throughout that the demon is intimate with Dean, but doesn't return that intimacy. That the sex isn't shared - it's damaging, and very one-sided damage. It's close to rape, throughout, despite Dean's very enthusiastic participation.
Brilliant concept. Just - excellent idea. Yeah. How to fuck up Dean Winchester in five easy steps.
This line: Dean Winchester lives in his skin so he doesn't have to live in his head, but right now it's his skin that's the problem, that fine body that his daddy bought him. Yes, that. That exactly.
Your handle on Dean's character is as solid as your concept of Sam, I think.
Love that you didn't forget about Cassie - it seems many fic writers do, when they talk about the people Dean loves.
Ummm. Anyway. Well done.
- hg